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论文精修前
Before taking the writing course, I’ve only touched the TOEFL writing which belongs to the argumentative writing all the time. Varying from 131 writing to TOEFL, more complex claim might be required, which plays one of the most important role on developing a paper. Besides, knowing the audience spares no effort to establish successful and complete writing. Aside from that, deciding the appropriate style, tone and conventions to use in our writing for specific is important as well. Embracing an outperformed goal, I have written 4 short assignments and 2 major assignments using different writing skills in order to fulfill the outcomes. There is an attachment of essays to each outcome which will show you that I have successfully met the goal of the course. However,I must apologize for some of the formatting error as you will see. Hopefully, my reflections and essays prove my great efforts over the quarter.
论文精修后
Before taking the writing course, I only touched the TOEFL writing course that frequently took advantage of argumentative writing assignments. When I compare English 131 writing to TOEFL style assignments, more complex claims might be required, which play one of the most important roles in developing a paper. I have also realized that my writing should be succinct and complete no matter what kind of audience is reading my papers. Aside from that, deciding the appropriate style, tone and conventions to use in
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Aside from that, deciding the appropriate style, tone and conventions to use in my writing for specific purposes are important as well. Embracing my goal of successfully completing this course, I have written four short assignments and two major assignments using different writing skills. show that I have successfully met the goal of the course.
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assignments using different writing skills. show that I have successfully met the goal of the course.
Editor’s comment:
This was a very good essay. Your points came across very clear and I like your analysis. We made the word flow a little smoother, and we added some text to bridge your ideas. Remember to unpack your ideas as much as possible. Don’t assume the reader knows the same material you do. Lay down everything simply so they can follow step by step.
For style, please break up your long sections into paragraphs. One paragraph per idea, so your reader can follow along easier. Also, please keep your citations consistent. For MLA, there is no “p” for page numbers.